Second Screening Feedback

From the feedback I got from my second screening I can see the things I need to improve on; such as adding my titles in, as I don't like how my titles have come along at the moment. I was testing what the titles would be like if I had them on screen, however I don't think that they work so I will add a black screen to increase the length of my video, and stick to what I had planned out. I can see from the feedback that some people didn't like how short the video clips are, as they couldn't read what was being written, however I have chosen to do this on purpose so it fits in with the music and to create mystery to the video. I will finish off editing the film and make it at least 2 minutes long, by adding the rest of the video clips I have previously filmed and adding in the titles.